A CAR IN A GHOST FARM

  One night in 1966  at 2:56 am a creepy old lady whent for a drive at 2:56 am and when it hit 3 am. She saw a ghost in the car next to her. The creepy old lady screamed in fear from the ghost and then she sew the sine she was in a ghost farm 

She died of shock! Her brother and sister 

And her husband found the car and her dead body. Her brother felt a shiver down his spine and then her husband heard something that sounded like this ooo

There was someone coming. They were in the bushes with a gun and he shot them . the police remove the dead bodies and close the farm down for investigations

 

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WALT: Use description in our writing to paint a picture in our readers imagination

PLANNING:  Spend 5 minutes using the below table to help you brainstorm some ideas you COULD include in your writing.

WHO	creepy old lady, ghost, brother, sister, husband
WHAT	See ghost
WHEN	1966
WHERE	ghost farm
WHY	Sees  ghost
HOW	Died from shock

I used descriptive writing wheh I wrote 'creepy old lady' and the time 2;56 or 3 am